the more the merrier...

my goal of this essay was to get it to be as close to perfect as possible....which i am sure is every ones goal as well...hehe. but i started with my rough draft and after getting back the corrections and advising over the paper i scheduled a meeting with ms. starhia to talk in more detail..after this i sent back multiple drafts and the paper started to become constructed! i truly believe that the more drafts you send the more composed your paper becomes and this time my paper is close to perfect (hopefully)! even though it takes alot of extra time and preparation, its is worth it in the long run and i recommend everyone to send in multiple drafts to ms. starhia to get the best results popular.. the more drafts the merrier! :))

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ok so i find myself discovering somthing while reading this book. and even though i think im a little like evey character... i think im most like Nathan... i know that sounds horrible but service learning as Religion in my life and im very closed minded about it. IDK lets just hope we all do good on the test 2morrow.... let us pray

nsongonya, well kind of

My house has recently been infested with some devilish termite-looking bugs. Gross, right? Anyways, I took a nap earlier today for about an hour and a half. All of a sudden, I felt something crawling on my arm. I opened my eyes, my vision still a bit blurry with sleep, to see one of these devils on my arm. I flicked it off and thought nothing more of it. That is, until my vision was fully regained and I saw HUNDREDS of these little devils ALL OVER MY BED!! Needless to say, I freaked! It reminded me of the attack of the ants. Well, mine wasn't so deadly, but I was still as creeped out by my endeavor as when I was reading that part of the book.

Help!

I am having a difficult time working on my conclusion of my Rhetorical Analysis essay. Ms. Stariha says its to listy, and I totally agree with her! Does anyone have any suggestions? Leonid Fridman wrote this essay to change the mindset of Americans. He not only made many impressive points about how nerds are treated, but also uses literary techniques to further the readers understanding and to make them emotionally involved. With his Logos and a Pathos appeal, Fridman gives the reader factual evidence in hopes of convincing him that nerds have an important place in this world and should be treated with respect.

NO MORE SWEARING

Ok so its the last day a spring break, uhhhggg!!! But it is ok, you know why because Tuesday I have a track meet and im going to rock it. So we are supposed to write about things that are not about our lifes, to meet the expectations of the Brit Lit Kids!!!!! Yeah okay, so I have been reading the PoisionWood Bible and I am not going to LIE I still have a little bit left to read, but what I have read so far has really confussed me. So I read it really fast like almost a skim read and instead of re-reading it I though i would use the BLOG for the It's real PURPOSE, and that purpose of course being to answer questions? (I think) So my question is WHY are they worried about the revolution, is it because they are white or what?! Well this is probably the longest blog I have ever written and if you couldnt tell it is kind of a run on, so that it appears like I have written a lot!!! See you all TOMORROW!!!!!!