"When I look closer into the empty auditorium I see the vague faces of loved ones.
Some stand out boldly in the front row, as others fade in the back.
My mothers smile becomes a spotlight shinning on her daughters bold movements..."
This personal narrative was such a great way for me to let out my emotions freely!
I have realized so much throughout my years and am so excited for my new stage of life!
I feel this is a writing assignment where we can take control of the paper and not let the paper take over us.
I am excite to hear every ones creative writings!
And the peer editing today was such a help, my group really took it seriously and it became very effective in each of our papers.
THANKS nora and becca!
Your narrative sounds really good for as much of it that you posted. I feel the same about this paper as you. When I did my rough draft, it was more of an essay than a narrative, so I hope mine comes together well, but I think it will because I can easily take my points I was making earlier and turn it into a narrative.
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