those of you reading the color purple..
what is the nasty women disease?..that Shug is dying from...When I first read it I thought of Aids, or some STD, because..Shug sleep around according to Mr.________'s dad? but I'm not really sure .
and as for the rough draft,
the peer editing activity we did today in class has already helped so much! now, i just have to make my changes so i can send a "good" rough draft to Ms. Stariha.
Nasty women disease? Maybe it's some acute vaginal infection that (for that time) is uncurable. I'm not to sure either.
ReplyDeletePeer editing did help a lot! I find that once I read someone else's paper, it helped me look at my own in a critical way as well.
ReplyDeleteI definitely agree with you on that Casey. After reading other (good) rough drafts, I'm hoping I will understand what I have to change in my paper to make it what I want it to be.
ReplyDeletePeer editing really helped! It made me look deeper into my paper and realize what I need to add or take out to make my paper close to perfect as possible...and lots of rough drafts help soo much!
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